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I Can See the Devil's Smirk

Remembering those lips I have kissed, cruel lips of blasphemy sharp and cold biting deep but forever ensnaring me --for I hold them close and won't let go and they chase it all away make me forget what I want always ready for play-- harsh cruel lips in a gaping line the very devils smirk stares back from ripped up wrists for in those lips his bite lurks. Remembering those lips I have kissed shard cold biting silver lips deep inside this skin I beg you one last kiss.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/5/2009 3:03:00 AM
Smile~Alright then, well, pucker up...."You" are so intense Madison~And "Your" writing develops such a uniquely gifted flavor from it all...."You" have mastered "Your" craft Mrs. Poe!!!:):)~And I am going to love knowing "You" immensly I believe~But I must warn "You," I have a silver tongue; sharp as a two edged sword~Smile~"My Love To You, John!!!":):)~On we go....
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Date: 6/2/2009 4:46:00 PM
The ending to me is such a contrast to the rest of the poem..love the way you described the lips..well done.
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