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I Can See Now

I can see now, the bubble we lived, was so fake. I can see now, giving my heart was my mistake. Now I can see through all your lies, wool no longer covers my eyes, I can see now. (Bubble) M.Mahauariki © 2012

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Date: 2/11/2012 6:21:00 AM
the rhyme and rhythm caught my attention at the first line, which doesn't happen often. love it! :)
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Murray Mahauariki
Date: 2/11/2012 7:01:00 PM
Thank you - Muzz
Date: 2/10/2012 9:25:00 PM
thanks for this one, muzz... nice one!...:) hugggs!
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