Murray Mahauariki Poet Verse

I Can See Now

I can see now,
the bubble we lived, was so fake.
I can see now,
giving my heart was my mistake.
Now I can see through all your lies,
wool no longer covers my eyes,
I can see now.

(Bubble)
	
M.Mahauariki © 2012

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Linda Xiao February 11, 2012 at 6:21 AM the rhyme and rhythm caught my attention at the first line, which doesn't happen often. love it! :) Murray Mahauariki February 11, 2012 at 7:01 PM Thank you - Muzz

Nette Onclaud February 10, 2012 at 9:25 PM thanks for this one, muzz... nice one!...:) hugggs!