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I Can Hear

I can hear the dripping and I can hear the sizzling and the clinking and everything is moving... but i am still i am so still and the shouting is in the background i miss the laughter and the smiles all around but as quick as they turn to frowns i feel the demons rise from the ground... where am i going ... not up ... but sadly down...

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Date: 5/17/2016 12:09:00 AM
mandy dowden, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
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Date: 5/14/2016 3:19:00 PM
MANDY D, Fantastic writing, glad to read your poem. ~Love LINDA~
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Date: 11/24/2010 9:58:00 AM
Please continue to share your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup. Wishing you and yours a wonderful Thanksgiving Mandy. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/17/2010 4:07:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Mandy. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/16/2010 7:53:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your very creative write tonight in poetry which seems to me Free Verse Form... hope your time on Soup will be special and fun.. check out the contest page offered to members.. good luck with luv.. be blessed this happy day ..luv..
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Date: 11/16/2010 4:52:00 PM
Manday, whata poem,, i hearyou out loud! enjoyed your poem,.p.d.
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Date: 11/16/2010 2:39:00 PM
Intense...never allow your glass to be half-empty. :) Awesome piece! Truly diggin' this...
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Date: 11/16/2010 2:29:00 PM
:)
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Date: 11/16/2010 2:12:00 PM
free verse is your form, very provocative too! Light & Love
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