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I Can Hear

I can hear the dripping and I can hear the sizzling and the clinking and everything is 
moving... but i am still i am so still and the shouting is in the background i miss the laughter 
and the smiles all around but as quick as they turn to frowns i feel the demons rise from the 
ground... where am i going ... not up ... but sadly down...

lost lovei do not know?

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Skat A

May 17, 2016 at 12:09 AM

mandy dowden, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**

Poet Destroyer A

May 14, 2016 at 3:19 PM

MANDY D, Fantastic writing, glad to read your poem. ~Love LINDA~

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 24, 2010 at 9:58 AM

Please continue to share your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup. Wishing you and yours a wonderful Thanksgiving Mandy. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 17, 2010 at 4:07 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Mandy. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 16, 2010 at 7:53 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your very creative write tonight in poetry which seems to me Free Verse Form... hope your time on Soup will be special and fun.. check out the contest page offered to members.. good luck with luv.. be blessed this happy day ..luv..