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I Called You Mother - To Our Mother Earth

I CALLED YOU MOTHER (To our mother earth)

You are brief - today earth
don't contain me-
don't comprehend me
you still must learn to speak to me
by telling me how.

You are the one who
opens the seed - naked
and forced it to the song
you set on its centre
an exact address of man
or towering tree
and light 'the kingdom'.

Yet I called 'Mater'- 
your immense face.

When the evenings bouncing on the ridge
and stretch limbs excess in every vital sign
I justified the sky
at the shade of a little knowledge.

I know it is unwise getting your sleep at my vigils-

And you are Gaia that is earth
clods of Intelligence Bread over the clay -

And there's nothing - Gea -
I can teach you-
The sky has no teachers under its arc
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Agustin Avatar
October 19, 2024 at 12:53 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 18, 2016 at 10:12 AM
Virginia, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 8:03 PM
Virginia, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
Tsiluma Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 10:29 AM
Very well written Virginia! I love how you've given the title 'mother' to this powerful and awe inspiring planet - it showcases its capabilities but brings out its nurturing and comforting attributes. Very well penned.
Sanders Avatar
May 21, 2013 at 7:29 PM
Nicely done poet
Russo Avatar
January 30, 2013 at 12:16 PM
Very nice poem! Hope you have some time to read also some of my poems :)
Davis Avatar
January 19, 2012 at 8:24 AM
Nice write. Welcome to the soup :-)
Murru Avatar
January 19, 2012 at 8:18 AM
Thanks a lot - Elisabeth, for the nice attention.
Scholtz Avatar
January 19, 2012 at 7:41 AM
Enjoyed your poem Virginia, welcome to Poetry Soup. Elizabeth
Brown Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 11:40 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this afternoon Virginia. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
Murru Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 12:11 PM
Tons of thanks for the warm welcome, Carol, of course I reciprocate your nice wishes. .. I apologize because my English isn't excellent at all!
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