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I Breathe Out Loud

the deepest part of my heart has a key, gulping and squeezed, with precious tears, fears frozen with sweet memories, loving cup that overflows — a blue-blue fountain strumming in a garden with singing trees. § the secret garden of my mind flowing in four different directions, partitions of a red-red beating heart, a steady beat, massaged, alive by the hand of Christ. roses and tulips intertwine succinctly. § apropos petals propose a seasoned mix, a stir of scented wind. honeysuckle and lavender tryst fill my eyes with happiness but the winds always changing, often brisk and dating, the calendar flipping, flouncing § and the ground shaking beneath my knees whilst i breathe out loud, sensations of anxiety, ne’er knowing where life will lead but faith, ferocious faith and hope, yes-love must tender me a kiss via my savior. 12/4/2019

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Date: 12/5/2019 10:39:00 AM
Beautiful, for every breath, tender me a kiss.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/7/2019 5:08:00 AM
Thank you, DM!
Date: 12/5/2019 4:42:00 AM
"the secret garden of your mind" is lovely.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/7/2019 5:07:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 12/4/2019 9:40:00 AM
A magnicent poem Kim. Panagiota xxx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/4/2019 9:41:00 AM
Thank you, dear friend!
Date: 12/4/2019 9:16:00 AM
Very nice Kim! Nice to read today :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/4/2019 9:40:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi!
Date: 12/4/2019 8:49:00 AM
Beautifully done my friend. Love and affection flows freely from your pen.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/4/2019 9:00:00 AM
Thank you so much! Caught up with much emotion...life is tough and also grand.
Date: 12/4/2019 8:21:00 AM
- Beautiful lines filled with deep emotions, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/4/2019 8:24:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! :)

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