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I BLEND A TALE FROM HUES

I BLEND A TALE FROM HUES

Hue of cobalt blue reigns quiet the sky,
The shining light from the sun
witnesses blend of stories,

sloped half in the solid ground is a home--
once a chandelier of love
shown out bright from jumping hues

painted forepart on the wall of the house.
Some trees lush with green leaves  peeps
to this gray man bowing low.

They tell black and white tales that was once here.
Unto the ground are dusts, stones
gathered slow by blowing winds,

They bury somehow some sad memories
this land suffered long ago.
When will all beam a toned thought?


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Picture #2
©O.E. Guillermo

Contest: East Jesus
Sponsor: Roy Jerden 
Placed: 5th


01:12 am, December 30, 2014






Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/3/2015 8:56:00 PM
Lovely kimo Olive! Congrats on ur big win!
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Date: 1/4/2015 7:58:00 AM
congrats too Dr. Upma I read your entry.. :)!
Date: 1/3/2015 6:00:00 AM
Congrats on the the win with this fine take on the theme, Olive
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Date: 1/4/2015 7:57:00 AM
thanks much Dr. Ram.. :)!
Date: 1/3/2015 5:31:00 AM
Hi Olive, You have great language skills and usage. This was very interesting to read. I enjoyed your creation immensely. Good for you. Keep up the good work. Happy New Year! Have a great week end. Take care. Earl
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Date: 1/4/2015 7:56:00 AM
thanks much Earl, I learned a lot since I join here on soup.. :)! i love reading this helped me but in joining here helped me more.. :)!
Date: 1/3/2015 12:09:00 AM
I really like your poem, Olive. How are you? HOpe you are enjoying the new year. Congrats here for your win.
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Date: 1/4/2015 7:55:00 AM
thanks Andrea for liking my poem.. :) this only some figments of my imagination.. :)@
Date: 1/2/2015 11:52:00 PM
Olive, Interesting topic, poem and win. CONGRATULATIONS!!! Goodnight ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/4/2015 7:49:00 AM
morning Lolly Linda. :) thanks much. :D!
Date: 1/2/2015 12:15:00 PM
a commendable interpretation of Pic#2. Loved you won Olive. Hugs! >rajat
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Date: 1/4/2015 7:53:00 AM
thanks much Rajat.. :)! GBU
Date: 1/2/2015 11:48:00 AM
Olive, this is a fabulous write and true winner, congrats!
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Date: 1/4/2015 7:46:00 AM
thanks much Dave.. :)!
Date: 1/2/2015 11:14:00 AM
Congratulations Olive_eloi! I must have missed this lovely poem before, so good thing I found you on the winners' list! Like the imagery. hugs // paul
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Date: 1/4/2015 7:43:00 AM
thanks much PAul! Appreciate it!
Date: 1/2/2015 11:04:00 AM
Congrats on the win Olive,this is simply fantastic...huggs
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Date: 1/4/2015 1:26:00 AM
thanks much Sir.. :)! appreciate it lots!
Date: 1/2/2015 10:28:00 AM
such a colourful write - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/4/2015 1:25:00 AM
Thanks you so much fro the ocmment JAn.. :)!
Date: 12/31/2014 9:34:00 AM
toned thought--great Olive.God bless. Wish you and your family happy New Year 2015. See you NY.Love--rajat
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Date: 1/1/2015 4:26:00 AM
thank you so much Rajat.. :)! I really appreciate your comments.. :)! you all do pull my muse to write more and more.. :)!
Date: 12/31/2014 7:43:00 AM
Dear Olive: Thank you for the support my friend. Here's wishing you and your loved ones A Happy New Year filled with peace, joy and love. All my best wishes on the last day of 2014, Leon.
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Date: 12/31/2014 6:13:00 PM
Dear Leon thanks much for dtoppinh by.. God bless you and Happy New Year. :)!
Date: 12/31/2014 6:16:00 AM
Full of colorful imagery Olive...wonderful... Happy New Year.... Hugs Tim
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Date: 12/31/2014 6:11:00 PM
thanj you so much Tim.. :) God bless.. :)