Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Kimo

I Blend a Tale From Hues

I BLEND A TALE FROM HUES

Hue of cobalt blue reigns quiet the sky,
The shining light from the sun
witnesses blend of stories,

sloped half in the solid ground is a home--
once a chandelier of love
shown out bright from jumping hues

painted forepart on the wall of the house.
Some trees lush with green leaves  peeps
to this gray man bowing low.

They tell black and white tales that was once here.
Unto the ground are dusts, stones
gathered slow by blowing winds,

They bury somehow some sad memories
this land suffered long ago.
When will all beam a toned thought?


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Picture #2
©O.E. Guillermo

Contest: East Jesus
Sponsor: Roy Jerden 
Placed: 5th


01:12 am, December 30, 2014

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 3, 2015 at 8:56 PM Lovely kimo Olive! Congrats on ur big win! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 4, 2015 at 7:58 AM congrats too Dr. Upma I read your entry.. :)!

Dr.Ram Mehta January 3, 2015 at 6:00 AM Congrats on the the win with this fine take on the theme, Olive Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 4, 2015 at 7:57 AM thanks much Dr. Ram.. :)!

Earl Schumacker January 3, 2015 at 5:31 AM Hi Olive, You have great language skills and usage. This was very interesting to read. I enjoyed your creation immensely. Good for you. Keep up the good work. Happy New Year! Have a great week end. Take care. Earl Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 4, 2015 at 7:56 AM thanks much Earl, I learned a lot since I join here on soup.. :)! i love reading this helped me but in joining here helped me more.. :)!

Andrea Dietrich January 3, 2015 at 12:09 AM I really like your poem, Olive. How are you? HOpe you are enjoying the new year. Congrats here for your win. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 4, 2015 at 7:55 AM thanks Andrea for liking my poem.. :) this only some figments of my imagination.. :)@

Poet Destroyer A January 2, 2015 at 11:52 PM Olive, Interesting topic, poem and win. CONGRATULATIONS!!! Goodnight ~LINDA~ Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 4, 2015 at 7:49 AM morning Lolly Linda. :) thanks much. :D!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 2, 2015 at 12:15 PM a commendable interpretation of Pic#2. Loved you won Olive. Hugs! >rajat Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 4, 2015 at 7:53 AM thanks much Rajat.. :)! GBU

Paul Callus January 2, 2015 at 11:14 AM Congratulations Olive_eloi! I must have missed this lovely poem before, so good thing I found you on the winners' list! Like the imagery. hugs // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 4, 2015 at 7:43 AM thanks much PAul! Appreciate it!

Kayod5 Kayode January 2, 2015 at 11:04 AM Congrats on the win Olive,this is simply fantastic...huggs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 4, 2015 at 1:26 AM thanks much Sir.. :)! appreciate it lots!

Jan Allison January 2, 2015 at 10:28 AM such a colourful write - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 4, 2015 at 1:25 AM Thanks you so much fro the ocmment JAn.. :)!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty December 31, 2014 at 9:34 AM toned thought--great Olive.God bless. Wish you and your family happy New Year 2015. See you NY.Love--rajat Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 1, 2015 at 4:26 AM thank you so much Rajat.. :)! I really appreciate your comments.. :)! you all do pull my muse to write more and more.. :)!

Leon Enriquez December 31, 2014 at 7:43 AM Dear Olive: Thank you for the support my friend. Here's wishing you and your loved ones A Happy New Year filled with peace, joy and love. All my best wishes on the last day of 2014, Leon. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 31, 2014 at 6:13 PM Dear Leon thanks much for dtoppinh by.. God bless you and Happy New Year. :)!

Tim Smith December 31, 2014 at 6:16 AM Full of colorful imagery Olive...wonderful... Happy New Year.... Hugs Tim Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 31, 2014 at 6:11 PM thanj you so much Tim.. :) God bless.. :)