I Believe

Honesty
Cross your heart and hope to die*
Speak the truth and look directly into someone's eyes
Then the world will know you are not lying

* this was a phrase we used as children to say we were being truthful
11~20~14
Contest: Didactic
Sponsor Regina Riddle
~awarded 5th place

truthdidactic

♡Like0

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Tim Smith

December 9, 2014 at 9:59 AM

Congrats Jan

Jan Allison

December 9, 2014 at 10:49 AM

Many thanks Tim:-) hugs Jan x

Dr.Ram Mehta

December 8, 2014 at 8:35 PM

A great poem, congrats on the win

Jan Allison

December 9, 2014 at 1:06 AM

Many thanks Dr Mehta:-) Hugs jan x

Brenda Meier-Hans

December 8, 2014 at 4:53 PM

Famous words worldwide. I always giggled if I had to look them in the eye, even when I was telling the truth. Oh ya, I was a giggled. Congratulations on your win Jan. XXOO

Jan Allison

December 8, 2014 at 4:56 PM

Thanks Brenda:-) hugs jan xxx

Joseph May

December 8, 2014 at 3:34 PM

Congrats on your Win Jan

Jan Allison

December 8, 2014 at 3:55 PM

Many thanks Joseph:-) hugs jan xxx

Kayod5 Kayode

December 8, 2014 at 2:54 PM

" I cross my heart",nicely packaged; congrats on the win Jan...huggs

Jan Allison

December 8, 2014 at 2:55 PM

Thanks so much Kayod5:-) hugs jan xx

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

December 8, 2014 at 11:19 AM

Congrats to you, Jan! These are words of wisdom..I think we all said that as a child. Honesty is important to everyone, even children...hugs, Rhonda

Jan Allison

December 8, 2014 at 2:09 PM

Many thanks Rhonda:-) Hugs Jan xx

Regina Mcintosh

December 8, 2014 at 10:33 AM

Thank you for entering the contest. I've posted a blog on this contest if you're interested. Love and prayers and many blessings for you, Gina

Jan Allison

December 8, 2014 at 2:08 PM

Thanks for the wonderful contest - i will go and read the blog:-) Hugs jan xxx

Sandra Haight

December 8, 2014 at 9:43 AM

Hi Jan, Excellent words to live by! Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison

December 8, 2014 at 2:08 PM

Thanks so much Sandra:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick

December 8, 2014 at 9:27 AM

Good moral to practice..Enjoyed reading your winning work..I remember the quoted line from my childhood..Congrats..Sara

Jan Allison

December 8, 2014 at 2:07 PM

Thanks so much Sara:-) Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

December 8, 2014 at 6:11 AM

Congratulations on another win Jan!

Jan Allison

December 8, 2014 at 7:41 AM

Thanks Maurice:-) hugs Jan xxx

Earl Schumacker

December 6, 2014 at 1:30 PM

Hi Jan, They say the eyes are the window to the soul. So true. Some windows need a little Windex to clear them up. This is a first for me. I just figured out how to rate a poem. I gave you the first 7 I have ever posted for anyone. (Simply because I didn't know how to do it and I would have done it sooner for you.) Let me know if it registered on your account. Take care. Earl

Jan Allison

December 6, 2014 at 1:48 PM

You can only see the rating on when you go to edit poems Earl you cant see who gave it but thank you i am honoured:-) I never rate less than a 7! It was 3 months before I rated a poem - think they should tell people about it when they sign up! Hugs Jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne

November 21, 2014 at 12:13 PM

Excellent write Jan, hope you win big. I am going to fav this as a reminder.

Jan Allison

November 21, 2014 at 12:15 PM

Thanks so much Maurice I do appreciate your support:-) Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

November 21, 2014 at 12:12 PM

I try to look everyone I talk to in the eyes but sometimes with women no matter how hard I try my eyes have a mind of their own!

Jan Allison

November 21, 2014 at 12:15 PM

yes Maurice I guess quite a few men have this problem lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

November 21, 2014 at 12:10 PM

I remember the time a female friend of mine sat on Pinochio's face and yelled, "Lie to me! Lie to me!"

Jan Allison

November 21, 2014 at 12:13 PM

ha ha ha love it Maurice:-) hugs jan xx

David Meade

November 20, 2014 at 7:07 PM

Lies are spoken by flattering lips and a double heart, with darting eyes falsehoods are spread . . . speaking truth takes courage and a steady gaze! What an awesome poem . . . my blue eyes are staring at you -- no lies.

Jan Allison

November 20, 2014 at 7:13 PM

David you analyse every word and make such wonderful comments - thank you. i am smiling back with my green eyes:-) Hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

November 20, 2014 at 6:34 PM

I always like to look a person in the eyes when I talk to them to see their true feelings...excellent Jan....hugs Tim

Jan Allison

November 20, 2014 at 6:44 PM

Yes we can't hide the truth then Tim:-) hugs jan x

Charmaine Chircop

November 20, 2014 at 6:03 PM

Its all in the eyes,both truth and lies,heartaches and joy..Its all in the eyes.Honesty is the best policy.I prefer a straightforward person to a butter me up person,anytime.Wise words sweet lady.

Jan Allison

November 20, 2014 at 6:07 PM

Yes you can tell a lot about a person from the eyes - I love the song 'lying eyes' by The Eagles and was listening to this when I wrote the poem Hugs Jan xx

I Believe

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment

Member Area

Soup Social

Member Poems

Member Poets

Famous Poems

Famous Poets

Poetry Resources