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I Await

I await the dawn,
paling the darkest of nights,
rose hues kiss my cheek. 

02/19/2019

morninghaiku

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Andrea Dietrich

February 21, 2019 at 7:59 PM

this senryu is gorgeous, Kaveesha. And my dog dream, I believe the dog really did visit me that night on his way out of this world. Then I did fall into a real dream about him walking the streets with me after I felt him in my arms!

Kaveesha Ruwindi

February 26, 2019 at 2:49 AM

Thanks Andrea

Gershon Wolf

February 19, 2019 at 4:17 PM

So well-penned, Kaveesha. Just love the way that last line works with the rose hues of dawn kissing your cheek. Is there a haiku contest floating around the Soup for this one? Excellent! ~ Gershon

Kaveesha Ruwindi

February 26, 2019 at 2:49 AM

Thanks :)

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