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I Await

I await the dawn, paling the darkest of nights, rose hues kiss my cheek. 02/19/2019

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/21/2019 7:59:00 PM

this senryu is gorgeous, Kaveesha. And my dog dream, I believe the dog really did visit me that night on his way out of this world. Then I did fall into a real dream about him walking the streets with me after I felt him in my arms!

Kaveesha Ruwindi
Date: 2/26/2019 2:49:00 AM

Thanks Andrea

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/19/2019 4:17:00 PM

So well-penned, Kaveesha. Just love the way that last line works with the rose hues of dawn kissing your cheek. Is there a haiku contest floating around the Soup for this one? Excellent! ~ Gershon

Kaveesha Ruwindi
Date: 2/26/2019 2:49:00 AM

Thanks :)