I Asked of God

I asked of God, 'Where's heaven?' Now,
sun's aura greets the day.
Its light and warmth enable us
to work, to grow, and play.

I asked of God, 'Where's beauty.' His
sun yields to evening's sky.
Each rich-hued dusk of colors mark
so well a day gone by.

Then God showed me the peoples that
make up the human race.
"All that you see are children, please
show them my truth and grace."

I asked God, "Take me home now, I'm
so weary, lonely, tired?"
He answered, "Child, have patience, strive
toward all things aspired."

He sees me inside-out, this God
and knows it's hard to wait.
Life's trials are but a shadow of
the glory past His gate.

"Be patient, child, in all you do
this journey's but a stay.
My promise is of mansions, I'll
return to lead the way."

                     Common verse
                     4-14-14

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 4/16/2015 8:00:00 AM
I think I would go with the child like wonder in your case Brian.
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Date: 4/14/2015 7:51:00 AM
A child like wonder is certainly a good place to begin. I enjoyed this piece very much.
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Brian Baumgarn
Date: 4/16/2015 6:37:00 AM
Thanks for your words, Richard. At my age, I hope it is childlike wonder and not 'creeping senility,' LOL. Be blessed as always.
Date: 4/13/2015 9:19:00 AM
I am thoroughly impressed by this piece! It is heartwarming truth! A beautiful read and a 7 from me!
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Date: 4/16/2015 6:39:00 AM
Thanks for your kind words on my poem, I asked of God. Honestly, if I didn't believe deeply in a God I don't know where I would be. If it energizes anyone else in their walk, super. Be Blessed.
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