I & U

I & U 
never made it to perfection.
		I remain un(decided) about
	weather and storms
(orclearskie);        and
	distance of another world;
		
			africa(Uganda;Kenya) is an

		un(faith)ful friend. & finally th(is)
	Not a poem about l(u)ve
they’re as un(likely) as we're[1]
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
September 4, 2009 at 3:23 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Daniel. Love, Carol
Culverhouse Avatar
September 3, 2009 at 3:00 PM
welcome to the soup, keep sharing with us I like to be challenged.
Culverhouse Avatar
September 3, 2009 at 2:59 PM
interestingly done, i haven't quite figured it out yet.
Kendrick Avatar
September 3, 2009 at 2:39 PM
Interesting design. Sara
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