I And They

I want to laugh with them, I want to cry with them, I want to play with them, I do want to quarrel with them, I do want to be with them, But they, are with them.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 3/3/2025 6:52:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Byeol Captain

Date: 3/1/2025 5:27:00 AM

Quite the way to describe one sided love. Good

BH Arish
Date: 3/2/2025 3:09:00 AM

Thank you