I Am Who I Am

I am sensitive, self-conscious,
Nervous, listless, anxious,
Caught up in the grind of life
Its stress and its strife.

With no goal, no aim, no purpose,
Oh, just living a life I suppose;
Not sure there's a God or a soul
Or in His grand design my role.

Bitter, cynical and regretful,
Not wise enough yet not a fool,
Jack of all trades, master of none
Lost more life's battles than won.

A seeker of truth, lost in lies
A seeker of love, lost in vice
A seeker of faith, lost in funfair
A seeker of hope, lost in despair.

Mindful of Man's frailty, foible and pet peeve,
I grieve for the ancestral sin of Adam and Eve!



~"Who ARE you?" contest by Catie Lindsey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Johnson-Saunders Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 12:42 PM
Yours is terrific, Malik! I love the last couplet...congrats! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
De La Luna Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 12:53 AM
great rhyme here, Abdul! your words says a lot, truly a seeker! Congratulations!
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 6:19 PM
Fantastic write here Abdul. Congratulations on your win.
Yvonne Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 3:30 PM
Fine write, Congratulations on your win.
Squyres Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 11:44 AM
What a great poem !! That last verse is so poignant !! Congrats on your win !!
Mandani Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 3:11 PM
Thanks Debra.
Hamilton Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 5:45 AM
good pen Abdul congrats on win hugs
Mandani Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 3:10 PM
Thanks Shadow. Glad you liked it.
Lamoureux Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 12:37 AM
This is beyond exceptional, it is moving! Congratulations. You have depicted man's struggle and personified it.
Mandani Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 3:09 PM
Thanks Richard.
Ioane Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 4:20 PM
You do have a poetic life, when you want it Abdul, that, you can master. Luv it, Tiaua.
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