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I Am Unleashed

Unleash the beast, from way deep down, stand up for whats right, or your going to drown. Don't get walked on, stand tall and proud, unleash your inner voice, from your soul scream loud! Don't cower away, or hide in the night, unleash your emotions, be a star shinning bright. Love all people, in sickness and in health, for only when you do, can you unleash yourself!

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Akash Yadav

Date: 2/24/2012 12:29:00 PM

I remember, at an early stage in my writing, I once got a comment that my poems were something in between ''50cent and Wordsworth''...this one just gives a feel of that...in fact, it's more like Rap...you write with your heart into the thing and the feelings are well delivered.....love it...:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/21/2012 3:14:00 PM

Wery good poem Amanda, I like it - oxox love Anne-Lise

Poet Tacito

Date: 2/20/2012 6:08:00 PM

A very necessary piece for all. This hit hard. Well done! :)

Michael Smith

Date: 2/20/2012 12:33:00 PM

Inspiring message.

Shirley Long

Date: 2/20/2012 12:28:00 PM

Great poem, I enjoyed reading it, especially the verses love all people in sickness and in health, for only when you do, can ou unleash yourself. These are words well spoken.