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I Am To Abandon

I AM TO ABANDON Ignoring my love, once you walked away, I had to observe. Tear drops in flood left blood red eyes. Tears dried but heart cried on every sunrise. Suffered on disgrace: Disrespect, dismay to embrace. Relic radiation of refusal scattered pale glow on wilted petal. Time wiped my feeling. Wounded heart went on healing. Heart turned hard, I totally forgot. New love, new dream life brought. Now you are at my door. It seemed, standing on distant offshore. You are asking for love begging pardon. Time is already gone: I am to abandon. 07/09/18 'Abandon 2' Poetry Contest by Brenda Cheri

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Date: 7/28/2018 12:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Sad.
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 7/28/2018 11:54:00 AM
Thanks Susan. Love
Date: 7/27/2018 7:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this well written poem with great imagery. Hugs Eve
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 7/28/2018 11:55:00 AM
Thanks n regards.
Date: 7/26/2018 9:06:00 AM
Well expressed, congrats on your win.
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 7/26/2018 1:20:00 PM
Thank you Richard to visit after a long time
Date: 7/10/2018 11:12:00 AM
It is a really beautiful poem with a really sad ending, I really enjoyed reading it, good luck and have a really nice day
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 7/25/2018 12:53:00 PM
Thank you Faraz for visit n appreciation
Date: 7/10/2018 7:00:00 AM
A very sad ending. He comes to his senses but it's too late. Awesome story, Anisha!
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