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I Am the Rose and the Thorn

the sun erases raindrops held on my rose lips opens my new bloom as wind erases your blood held against my thorns pricked your desire 9-27-2020 2nd Chances N/A Poems Chantelle Ann Cooke 7-9-2020 The Flower, The Thorn Or Both Poetry Contest N/A

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 7/19/2020 7:44:00 PM

Noice! Both a haiku and a personification. Well done, Jeanne:-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/10/2020 7:13:00 PM

ooh la la. that last one SO nice. And I also loved the first one!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/10/2020 5:04:00 PM

So delicate and exquisitely penned my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/9/2020 6:42:00 PM

Hello Jeanne McGee, the rose is my fav.flower. Thorns or no thorns. enjoy your evening my friend.