Jeanne Mcgee Poet Haiku

I Am the Rose and the Thorn

the sun erases
raindrops held on my rose lips
opens my new bloom

as wind erases
your blood held against my thorns
pricked your desire


9-27-2020  2nd Chances N/A Poems
Chantelle Ann Cooke

7-9-2020  
The Flower, The Thorn Or Both Poetry Contest
N/A

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Edward Ibeh July 19, 2020 at 7:44 PM Noice! Both a haiku and a personification. Well done, Jeanne:-)

Andrea Dietrich July 10, 2020 at 7:13 PM ooh la la. that last one SO nice. And I also loved the first one!

Caren Krutsinger July 10, 2020 at 5:04 PM So delicate and exquisitely penned my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu July 9, 2020 at 6:42 PM Hello Jeanne McGee, the rose is my fav.flower. Thorns or no thorns. enjoy your evening my friend.