I Am the Bee

I became Debra Joan at the age of six
Formerly known as Debbi Jo
Up until then that's what I'd know
Something my new parents thought they'd fix

Adopted then and a bit confused
I wasn't quite sure of who I was
A tender kid I cried because
I did not like this name they used

As I grew older I came to know
My first two names meant lots of trouble
I had to come running on the double
And the name sure wasn't Debbi Jo

Debra Joan was used so gruffly
Meaning I'd done something bad
I'd displeased my mom and dad
And I would sure be dealt with roughly

But then I learned something in school
That my name Debra meant"the bee"
And a prophetess of Israeli degree
This knowledge I thought was pretty cool

So I began to enjoy my name
Didn't mind losing my previous one
That name I'd had when I'd first begun
For the person I was remained the same






** for contest "What's In A Name"
sponsored by Linda-Marie-Sweetheart of PS
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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March 6, 2011 at 5:54 AM
Wonderful poem on your name Deb,congrats on your win---kashinath
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March 4, 2011 at 4:34 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest Deb. Love, Carol
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March 3, 2011 at 5:08 PM
as excitable and free as a bee! congrast on the big win, deb!;) huggs, nette
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March 3, 2011 at 2:02 PM
Cool little history of how your feeling for your name evolved and why you now say Deb. YOu busy little DebBEE. Congratulations.
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March 3, 2011 at 12:18 PM
Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest of Linda, Deb
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March 3, 2011 at 9:40 AM
Congrats Deb on your success in my contest What's in a Name luv.. with this superb entry.. appreciate u supporting my contests ...
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February 23, 2011 at 2:04 AM
Nice write!Glad to know the meaning of your name.Goodluck in the contest.
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