I Am Sure I Am the Oldest Too

The teacher whispered to me “I am older than you are, I know.”
I smiled at her eagerness, amazed at her honesty and her big blow….
I do not think so, I told her. As a matter of fact, I know you aren’t.
She said “I am sure I am.” Her name was Ms. Marnt.

I said, “I am just as sure that I am the oldest here.”
“I am sixty-two,” she whispered smugly in my ear.
I am pretty sure that 69 trumps sixty-two every time I said.
She was amazed, and her face got enormously red.

What are you still doing teaching? She asked in surprise.
This is my happy place I told her. It helps my brain waves rise.
She smiled at me and gave me a fist pump to the sky.
I gave her a large smile and a joyful wink from my hazel eye.

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Date: 4/14/2022 7:08:00 PM
Fist pump for 'Granny Power!' :) gw
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/14/2022 8:17:00 PM
Don't worry, I am good at it.
Date: 4/14/2022 12:55:00 PM
In the ambulance the other night, the EMT said, "I can't believe you are 80!" If he had been a girl, I would have given him a kiss! As it was, I just smiled and said, "Yep, I sure am!" It's so nice to not look your age, isn't it?
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/14/2022 8:31:00 PM
Caren -- We all have to go sometime! I seem to have escaped another bullet with my heart, but the time will come one of these days when I won't! It's okay. Trust me. I believe that...it'll be okay!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/14/2022 8:18:00 PM
It is very nice. The ambulance part concerns me though Hank.
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