I am Shallow

I am not like an ocean, blue and deep.
You needn't peer into my soul to peep. 
I am shallow like a puddle or pool, 
So, darling, why don't you kiss this fool?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 4:37 PM
that's pretty straightforward. :-)
Crandall Avatar
July 19, 2025 at 4:58 PM
straightforward, but not very effective :-))
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