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I Am Open

I am open not transparent vulnerable to the wind caught in an exchange of dialogues of thought and loneliness of heart. I am frail not hollow sensitive to the noise dazzled by misunderstandings of songs longing to be understood a language of alien satisfaction. I am torn not broken desire for a longing but crushed by surreality of what could be but wasn’t in life's constant brutality. I am open when love calls caught ablaze without dispute irrational senseless devotion rhetorical prosaic hum a divine instinctive notion.

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Date: 3/21/2018 6:42:00 AM
An elegant discourse of deep thoughts..well written poem, Oliver.
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Oliver Furlong
Date: 3/22/2018 4:51:00 PM
Thanks Vijay, your words count and mean a lot to me.

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