I Am No Ghost

I listened to a ghost That spoke solemnity And suffering It spoke of time and place Energy and matter Fascinating Drew lines and boundaries Confined personal space This buffering Invented sacrifice Symbols of penitence Humanity (It said something else But it was only a whisper Something about terror Something about guilt Something about punishment Something about panic I kept listening As it finished speaking I noticed it failed to mention That there's a light that shines behind it I dared to ask it why It was most unhappy with my question Tried to obscure the light Became more opaque And dense) Between the ghost and me It's frightened I may see This light that shines May well define My true reality Because I value most That I can finally boast That true to Word This light observed That I am not a ghost I just am
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Shango Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 9:00 AM
This is an excellent poem and a marvelous write ... I am coming back for more . Love always.
Kire Avatar
April 3, 2009 at 10:40 AM
it was kind of dark and i just love poems like that XD you're a great writer, i also never read anything like this ...Autumn...
Parish Avatar
March 8, 2009 at 9:41 PM
Hauntingly good write Yoni. I quit listening to my ghost too, it kept getting me in trouble...Smile! Oh, thanks for the tip on my write...it's looks better as a couplet...I changed it.
Lokken Avatar
February 28, 2009 at 10:59 AM
This is so powerful, brilliant expression. I love the last lines. Best wishes, Sara
Voorhees Avatar
February 27, 2009 at 8:34 PM
No apparition here!! Just some brilliant words! Welcome to the "Platoon"! = ) Right on, Write on!! Steve
Townsend Avatar
February 26, 2009 at 8:54 PM
Haunting and motivating. A wonderful way to remind us that we are what we are. Each day is a new beginning and that new beginning starts whenever we choose. Thank you for sharing. Smiles from Lolita
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