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I am the sunrise the spark of creation the breath of nature the whisper of twilight the rustling of leaves the touch of rainfall the drums of thunder the colour of rainbows the kiss of moonbeams the spring of compassion the voice of love the core of time I am the setting sun AP: 2nd place 2025 Posted on April 16, 2025

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/17/2025 9:11:00 PM

I love this kind of format, Line. With it you have captured truism after truism about the sun's power, and the form itself, esp. its brevity, is every bit as powerful as its topic. Bravo! A FAVE. Thank you, Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/19/2025 6:24:00 AM

Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Geshon ~ have a fabulous weekend