I am I say

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I am the sunrise
  the spark of creation
  the breath of nature
  the whisper of twilight
  the rustling of leaves
  the touch of rainfall
  the drums of thunder
  the colour of rainbows
  the kiss of moonbeams
  the spring of compassion
  the voice of love
  the core of time
I am the setting sun



AP: 2nd place 2025

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/17/2025 9:11:00 PM

I love this kind of format, Line. With it you have captured truism after truism about the sun's power, and the form itself, esp. its brevity, is every bit as powerful as its topic. Bravo! A FAVE. Thank you, Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/19/2025 6:24:00 AM

Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Geshon ~ have a fabulous weekend