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I Am Hurt

Silence so deafening it fills the room in its entirety, seeping into every corner A form curled up so small it dominates and commands, even though it barely occupies a square inch A heart so broken beyond repair, its beating compounds its own pain Tears appear to flow as if a dam has burst, although the river bed has long since dried out A mind so overwhelmed in its inability to process, it focuses on the calmness of a speck of dust A body so enveloped in tiredness it no longer requires nourishment or sleep Such abundance, such opulence all give rise to a singular meaning I am hurt

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Date: 7/27/2019 6:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Alunamda, in the contest. I really loved the matching of the end line to the titled and how it summed up what you showed so well in the poem. Bravo
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Alunamda Yokwe
Date: 7/28/2019 10:25:00 AM
Many thanks for your feedback, it's very much appreciated
Date: 6/3/2019 1:26:00 PM
Hello Alunamda Yokwe, your poem is so full of pain. A very good write. have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/3/2019 6:08:00 PM
What did you do that you are in pain? i hope it was not drastic. have a nice evening my friend.
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Alunamda Yokwe
Date: 6/3/2019 1:54:00 PM
Many thanks for the positivity, beauty often rises from pain

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