Carol Sunshine Brown Poet Quintain (English)

I Am Hoping

I want to pen that one amazing write
A poem everyone reads time and again
I always try hard to get the words right 
Many say on my heart I must depend
But it seems the wait will never end

One day it will happen I am sure
I will write that amazing poem for you
Until then I try not to be a bore
To myself I say don't give up whatever I do
I hear you also telling me I can do this too

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Virginia Gelok January 20, 2022 at 8:20 AM True or not, this is where I am and have been for some time but the words are coming easier all the time. Never give up...we can achieve what we want to put out there. Nice poem.

Barbara Barry-Nishanian February 25, 2018 at 3:10 PM The hope of all us new to soup..you're pen is not failing you. bbn

Busane Shoba January 8, 2012 at 12:33 AM nyc one. hope never dies.....its a river that keeps flowing all the tym and it gives a reason to smile again and believe

Ravindra K Kapoor January 6, 2012 at 8:48 AM Inspiring others through your wonderful poetry and words is a God gifted quality Carol, which shines like a gem in your writing and thoughts. Thanks for your kind comments on my featured Poem. Hope you would like my Sleep Song ' A song for you' which is also on my Music channel on U tube 'Ravindrakk1' Love and best wishes always...Ravindra...Carol Brown

Don Johnson December 14, 2011 at 4:12 PM interesting thoughts Carol , happy merry christmas...love...Don

Jack Horne December 14, 2011 at 9:08 AM I'm sure you will, Carol. Many congrats on your wins too : )

Dinda Minardi December 14, 2011 at 9:08 AM Who will question your crafted words, Carol? Who would dare? :) Sweet writing here, dear. How are u? I wish you a great holidays :)

Harry Horsman December 14, 2011 at 8:57 AM your warm heart is in every word you write Carol, long may it be. harry

Kacey Greenlee December 14, 2011 at 8:29 AM I believe in you Carol...Never stop writing,your natural flow of words are amazing...Much love to you today..I am truly inspired..

Poet Destroyer A December 14, 2011 at 8:16 AM Carol, another wonderful poem,,, hopeing is what keeps us going... good luck in the contest,..p.d.

Christopher Bunton December 14, 2011 at 2:21 AM Awesome!

Russell Sivey December 13, 2011 at 5:01 PM I really enjoyed this write Carol! You did it very well. And as you said, the "perfect poem" will come soon, just one ordinary day, it will hit you...as there it will be, your amazing write!! Great Work!!

Cory Long December 13, 2011 at 1:21 PM this is awesome and describes the soul of a great poem so nicely.. I think everyone is looking for that perfect poem.. I know I am :)