I Am Hidden

I am hidden 
Though I am in brood daylight
The light hides me
My face is hidden
My body obscure 
I am seen
But unseen
My voice lost
Still trapped in the air
Light is my friend
That works against me
But I am
Visible in the light
Just invisible
To you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Richards Avatar
December 29, 2010 at 7:18 AM
Love the way it expresses the lonely feeling of rejection. Well done, Crystal!
Goff Avatar
December 29, 2010 at 6:47 AM
Your light reflects off the stars forever, Crystal! good one!!! jimbo
Loving Iii Avatar
December 29, 2010 at 6:14 AM
i hate to say it but it's called unattracted. jhl
Sweetheart Avatar
December 29, 2010 at 5:57 AM
Intense and dramatic piece Crystal.. a great emotional write as well... expressing so well your inner feelings.. good luck with your own contest... if u need any help just ask the "Sweetheart"... enjoyed with luv... here is a Happy New Year toot to u from Ron and Me and sons... all four of them..
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