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I Am Hidden

I am hidden Though I am in brood daylight The light hides me My face is hidden My body obscure I am seen But unseen My voice lost Still trapped in the air Light is my friend That works against me But I am Visible in the light Just invisible To you.

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Carrie Richards

Date: 12/29/2010 7:18:00 AM

Love the way it expresses the lonely feeling of rejection. Well done, Crystal!

James Marshall Goff

Date: 12/29/2010 6:47:00 AM

Your light reflects off the stars forever, Crystal! good one!!! jimbo

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/29/2010 6:14:00 AM

i hate to say it but it's called unattracted. jhl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/29/2010 5:57:00 AM

Intense and dramatic piece Crystal.. a great emotional write as well... expressing so well your inner feelings.. good luck with your own contest... if u need any help just ask the "Sweetheart"... enjoyed with luv... here is a Happy New Year toot to u from Ron and Me and sons... all four of them..