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I Am Free

Your words have touched, so deep, within me Reviving a part that lay dormant for some time To where, my dear, through words I do now see That the life I have, was always there as mine Held captive, though, by a lack of rhyme Emancipated, I am, to venture as a poet As my captor, now has fled, I’m free to write Write, I shall, just as I’ve always known it My quill be filled with ink both day and night I thank you my dear friend for my new insight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 3/5/2009 6:50:00 AM
The pen is mightier!!! God Bless. Vince
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Date: 11/24/2008 8:45:00 AM
Michael This is a great happening. I am so happy for you. Your poems are absolutely fabulous I cant imagine anything better from you Michael. I'm so happy for you looking forward to reading your poetry after this. Anticipating your next write. Blessings Michael Torres
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Date: 11/24/2008 7:55:00 AM
Sounds like you've been blessed with a wonderful inspirational friend. Friends truly are a blessings, wonderful write! blessings, ~Michaela~
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Date: 11/24/2008 6:28:00 AM
You know Michael I've been touched by many people on this site, you included - Stay Strong in the things you write and let them reflect the person that you are because you are one hell of a man far as I can tell - Love your poetry - God Bless - Your friend, MJ
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Date: 11/24/2008 5:12:00 AM
sounds like you just got alot of your chest with the help of a friend, good for all. love Kristin
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