I Am Exposed

scrutinising eyes of
the female dog
transparent paws
under the naked tree
shedding green leaves
i am exposed
muddy brown water
from the yellow river
he is shaking delirious
she is selling pink flowers
of peace quietly
they are dancing
to the drums of the ruined
northern temple
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Salehi Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 12:59 AM
Your write is a painting, your painting is face less. Green-less tree, blue-less water.Whatever it is, it is exposed and you're divine.
Osho Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 2:21 AM
ty pashang. you made my week.
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