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I Am Dying For a Good Poem

I AM DYING FOR A GOOD POEM

I am dying… for a good poem
A good word put together to take me out, into space 
I need a good word to ease my worry
I need one that helps me grow
One to save my lonely day
I’m longing for one that has meaning that doesn’t confuse me
I’m dying for a poem written with care
One that opens my eyes for the first time, in a long time
I'm dying for a kind that fills me up, full brim...
Flat on the ground…for a poem that has meaning... to my life 
I am here…I'm over here

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Poet Destroyer A February 7, 2016 at 12:38 AM Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA Lame Mothupi March 21, 2018 at 7:40 AM Thank you Linda...

Skat A September 12, 2015 at 7:50 AM :) Lame Mothupi March 21, 2018 at 7:41 AM Right back atcha...:)

Ovidiu Bocsa February 3, 2015 at 2:13 PM I am living for a similar one!Congrat Lame Mothupi March 21, 2018 at 7:42 AM Right...?sigh,

Skat A December 17, 2013 at 10:44 PM Sorry for the late warm Welcome to the soup... Lame, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Welcome to poetry soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT Lame Mothupi March 21, 2018 at 7:48 AM :)

Poet Destroyer A December 6, 2013 at 5:04 PM hi, Lame, how impressive you've come to a great place. we have plenty of good poems. somehow I feel your life is like a poem. . , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@ Lame Mothupi March 21, 2018 at 7:47 AM Thank you...

Anne-Lise Andresen December 6, 2013 at 4:14 PM - Welcome to P-Soup, Lame ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :) Lame Mothupi March 21, 2018 at 7:46 AM Thank You So much Anne...

Aiyah Torres December 6, 2013 at 2:52 PM You have found a place where all your desires are cluster into one space,and that is PS.. Welcome darling!,,,you have a family here ;) Cheers!!! one love from AiyaH :') Lame Mothupi March 21, 2018 at 7:47 AM :)