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- I Am Dealing With It -

My thoughts are like thunderclouds

         Thoughts that collide and give worthless words

         Only sound .... my mind wants peace

         Running from the storm - another shortcut

         Another way to handle it








16.02.2014
A-L Andresen :)

(3st place in the contest)

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Jslambert Mister Roboto

August 2, 2014 at 6:46 PM

FORGOT TO RATE> 7!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 3, 2014 at 6:05 AM

- 10000 THANKS!!! :)

Jslambert Mister Roboto

August 2, 2014 at 6:45 PM

EXCELLENT!

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 3, 2014 at 6:04 AM

- THANKS! - :))

Arthur Vaso

April 8, 2014 at 10:02 PM

Lovely!

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 9, 2014 at 2:58 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comment, Arthur - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler

March 11, 2014 at 7:19 PM

To much brainstorming can sometimes lead to a big headache! I hope you have found that peaceful place you seek. You deserve to be happy, Anne-Lise! Another great write from you! Congratulations on your win, as well! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 12, 2014 at 2:45 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit, comment and congratulations on my poem, Kelly - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

March 10, 2014 at 6:13 AM

Very Wonderful write. Congrats on the win, ann

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 10, 2014 at 6:45 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit, comment and congratulations on my poem, Dr. Ram - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

March 10, 2014 at 2:51 AM

Anne, awesome win. ~ Love ~ SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 10, 2014 at 4:21 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit, comment and congratulations on my poem, Skat - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Vincent Flannery

February 23, 2014 at 11:37 AM

A great piece Anne Lise as we continue to battle the mind to succumb to a point of peace. May peace be at your foundation's core. Take care.

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 23, 2014 at 2:56 PM

- Difficult challenges - there is always a way to deal with things .... Never give up - sunshine will come... - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Vincent. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sandip Goswami

February 23, 2014 at 10:16 AM

Maximum effects with minimum material . Best wishes from India .

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 23, 2014 at 2:55 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comment from India, Sandip. - oxox // Anne-Lise :

Andrea Dietrich

February 22, 2014 at 4:14 PM

a really good one, Anne Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 23, 2014 at 6:57 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comment, Andrea - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Linda Jackson

February 22, 2014 at 1:54 PM

Well written poem with good imagery. "Running from the storm" is an excellent image. Best wishes Linda x

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 22, 2014 at 2:46 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comment, Linda - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Stephen Kilmer

February 21, 2014 at 9:57 PM

Your caught in a trap...there's a way out. Find peace and your mind will be free. ~Kilmer

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 22, 2014 at 7:52 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Stephen. - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Tacito

February 21, 2014 at 7:51 AM

Thunder is a beautiful thing. Certainly, not worthless. It's short, yet impacting to all. May you go up from here. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 21, 2014 at 12:17 PM

- After the storm comes the sun ..... always :))) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Drake. - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

February 19, 2014 at 2:25 PM

storm has passed, anne.. i feel you are enjoying your day!.. huggs to you..

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 19, 2014 at 3:17 PM

- The storm is gone ............ spring is in the waiting .... needs some work.......lol... - huggs back ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

February 19, 2014 at 12:43 PM

Life is about dealing with problems we either run from the storm or learn to deal with it. So many ups and downs in life almost like a roller coaster. Hope all is well my friend. Take care. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 19, 2014 at 2:01 PM

- True,Phyllis!! - Thanks for the nice visit and comments. - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

February 19, 2014 at 10:17 AM

A brilliant write my very dear friend Anne Lise. I especially like the two last lines. Handling it is a real courage to one of the transitory things in life: storm. Thank u so much for sharing! More blessings to u. love much and biggest hugs, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 19, 2014 at 10:40 AM

- After the storm comes the sun ..... always :))) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Leonora. - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Darren Watson

February 19, 2014 at 7:18 AM

A cup of hot chocolate whilst having a soak in the bath calms my dark clouds . Delightful read as always . Thanks for sharing.

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 19, 2014 at 7:52 AM

- Will remember that ..... in the future :))))

Darren Watson

February 19, 2014 at 7:49 AM

I'm a font of good advice and a part time gynaecologist So if you want to talk , Uncle Darren is always here .

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 19, 2014 at 7:34 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit,good advice and comments, Darren. - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Darren Watson

February 19, 2014 at 7:21 AM

My sisters swear by evening primrose oil . I've tried it , urgh.

Carly Lalion

February 18, 2014 at 12:07 PM

Finding some time to look at poems; this one caught my attention, Anne. Powerful thoughts lead you to confront a storm. That's the way to go!

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 18, 2014 at 12:52 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Carly. - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ken Carroll

February 18, 2014 at 12:02 PM

Nice slice of life write Anne..

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 18, 2014 at 12:05 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Ken. - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

February 18, 2014 at 10:32 AM

the sun is up and so is your beaming heart, anne... stay well and lovely... keep those bats away, lol.. happy monday with huggs!..

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 18, 2014 at 11:22 AM

- SUNSHINE :))) - After the storm comes the sun ..... always :))) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Nette. - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

February 18, 2014 at 9:42 AM

Wow! My lovely friend, you have beautifully differentiated between sound and peace and from where sound evolves. We always want short cut to have the peace with the help of words. Genius you are always. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 18, 2014 at 11:23 AM

Only ..... words that came to me ... :))) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, bl. - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

February 18, 2014 at 2:37 AM

beautifully written I hope the thunderclouds roll away to bring sunshine one day. ps the little eye did the trick thank you i have passed this tip on now xx Jan

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 18, 2014 at 2:45 AM

- After the storm comes the sun ..... always :))) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Jan. - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kira Price

February 18, 2014 at 1:13 AM

I know shortcuts gives us that momentary peace, but not the long term we would like. Nicely illustrated!

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 18, 2014 at 2:43 AM

- True,Kira - Thanks for the nice visit and comments. - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cherl Dunn

February 17, 2014 at 6:23 PM

Sorry it's hard to comment when your computer over heats constantly but I wanted to say thank you for your wonderful comment of coloseum. I have to have my new computer torn apart tommorrow hopely love your work above i can understand what you are trying to say very well i call it the poets maddness lol you have to write no matter what and have no peace of mind until it is on paper. cheri

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 18, 2014 at 2:40 AM

- Always something to fix. . . computers do not have a long life :(( - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Cherl. - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cecilia Macfarlane

February 17, 2014 at 3:33 PM

A shortcut from the storm in your head, we all take them until we can deal with them....brilliant write my dear : ) Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 17, 2014 at 3:36 PM

- Only ..... words that came to me ... :))) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Cecilia. - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Roger Horsch

February 17, 2014 at 2:55 PM

I don't know the meaning behind this poem. But I like it. It was wonderful to read........Hugs......Roger

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 17, 2014 at 3:06 PM

- Always challenges to deal with in life,Roger ..... but we always find a solution - Thanks for the nice visit and comments. - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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