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I Am Deadly

I am deadly. I can take a life. Used for protection in the night. Military and police use me. Always taught to never abuse me. Made of cold metal. Extemely careful with every touch now. Make sure only very experience people show you how. Sometimes I'm used in gang violence. Never ever take part in that. I can be very dangerous. One pull of my trigger can end in a splat. If you ever see me you will know what I mean. I look very menacing. The out- come of me isn't at all always clean.....

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Date: 6/5/2010 10:24:00 PM
YOu did great here. Congratulations!!
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Date: 5/25/2010 9:04:00 PM
congrats on your win with this concrete, Taylor, you sure did well with forming this gun :)
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Date: 5/24/2010 1:55:00 PM
Chilling! I reminder of what can happen. The artistic shape must have taken a lot of planning. Congratulations on your win in Amy's contest. Enjoy your honor. You may want to put something in the title line so people can access this poem more readily. Karen
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