I Am Deadly

I am deadly. I can take a life. Used for protection in the night.
Military and police use me. Always taught to never abuse me.
Made of cold metal. Extemely careful with every touch now.
Make sure only very experience people show you how.
Sometimes I'm used in           gang
violence. Never ever              take
part in that. I can be             very
dangerous. One                  pull
of my trigger can end in a splat.
If you ever see me
you will know what
I mean. I look very
menacing. The out-
come of me isn't at
all always clean.....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 10:24 PM
YOu did great here. Congratulations!!
K. Avatar
May 25, 2010 at 9:04 PM
congrats on your win with this concrete, Taylor, you sure did well with forming this gun :)
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May 24, 2010 at 1:55 PM
Chilling! I reminder of what can happen. The artistic shape must have taken a lot of planning. Congratulations on your win in Amy's contest. Enjoy your honor. You may want to put something in the title line so people can access this poem more readily. Karen
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