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I Am But a Spectator

Shooting stars, like arrows from a bow A Cosmic romance by heavens design I am but a spectator To loves common denominator The sun, eclipsed of white to reveal night A master plan, fate and destiny dealing cards I am but a spectator To loves common denominator Celestial voices whispering For the present and the past To loves common denominator I am but a spectator Moonlight Shines, like sunlight on water Astrological plans, by the hand of God To loves common denominator I am but a spectator

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John Rhinem

Date: 12/17/2008 5:00:00 PM

"No, You Are Not A Spectator~I Believe 'You' Are Part of The Show Dear!"~Wonderful Write Here, 'Beautiful Julie Cottingham!'"~My last stop of the day, "You!"~Why is that? Smile~I know! Because, these is something deeply deeply special about "You!"~I could tell from the very start actually, dear!~In "Your Writings!"~But something else? Something soulful I believe! But, I have time for your post today~And~"My Love Always To 'You,' John!"~Smile~"Beautiful Write!"

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/15/2008 5:49:00 PM

This is a lovely poem. I believe you among the stars....on Poetry soup....not just a spectator! :) ~ Carrie

Breana Wiggins

Date: 12/15/2008 4:42:00 PM

I love the flow of the poem...great write *Breana

Christopher Higgins

Date: 12/15/2008 4:14:00 PM

This is filled with heavenly beauty. The heavens and stars would be in awe of your words. I love the repetition of the title and the flow of the poem. Wonderful write!