Julie Cottingham Poet I do not know?

I Am But a Spectator

Shooting stars, like arrows from a bow

A Cosmic romance by heavens design

I am but a spectator

To loves common denominator


The sun, eclipsed of white to reveal night

A master plan, fate and destiny dealing cards

I am but a spectator

To loves common denominator


Celestial voices whispering

For the present and the past

To loves common denominator

I am but a spectator


Moonlight Shines, like sunlight on water

Astrological plans, by the hand of God

To loves common denominator

I am but a spectator

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John Rhinem December 17, 2008 at 5:00 PM "No, You Are Not A Spectator~I Believe 'You' Are Part of The Show Dear!"~Wonderful Write Here, 'Beautiful Julie Cottingham!'"~My last stop of the day, "You!"~Why is that? Smile~I know! Because, these is something deeply deeply special about "You!"~I could tell from the very start actually, dear!~In "Your Writings!"~But something else? Something soulful I believe! But, I have time for your post today~And~"My Love Always To 'You,' John!"~Smile~"Beautiful Write!"

Carrie Richards December 15, 2008 at 5:49 PM This is a lovely poem. I believe you among the stars....on Poetry soup....not just a spectator! :) ~ Carrie

Breana Wiggins December 15, 2008 at 4:42 PM I love the flow of the poem...great write *Breana

Christopher Higgins December 15, 2008 at 4:14 PM This is filled with heavenly beauty. The heavens and stars would be in awe of your words. I love the repetition of the title and the flow of the poem. Wonderful write!