Just That Archaic Poet Poet Rhyme

I Am a Lamb

My busted life- cracked and hollow,
Drowned too deep to find air or light
A thousand paths, but none to follow
(Don't let me fall from Heaven's height!) 

Ripped to shreds and bound in beds,
I cannot fathom who I am 
Lost in Lies and cold, grey skies-
I am a helpless, little Lamb

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Author: JustThatArchaicPoet

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Honestly J.T. October 15, 2013 at 11:51 AM Ahh.. true indeed. Powerful and passionate words. Good poem Just That Archaic Poet October 16, 2013 at 7:49 AM Thank you, PJ; I appreciate the compliments :)

Robin Davis September 28, 2013 at 4:30 PM Linda, this is a very deep and desperate write. You allow the reader to feel your pain and sorrow.' nice job Just That Archaic Poet September 28, 2013 at 9:23 PM Hi, Robin. I think you have Linda and I mixed up. I am the author of this piece. But I would hope you would feel the same way, either way lol. Thank you for the compliments :)

Linda Jackson August 21, 2013 at 11:21 AM The poem is full of self pity and despair. Very well written. Best wishes Linda x Just That Archaic Poet August 21, 2013 at 12:16 PM lol It sure is. I'm a pro at throwing pity parties. Thank you for the read and response; I very much appreciate it :)