I Am a Candle

With lights on I am taken lightly When around darkness I am shining brightly From solid to liquid And giving off gas Giving good smells For I will not last I was used rationally Back in the past But times have change So I am used so fast I am a candle This poem I wrote This is the end Of the poem, I note
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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May 16, 2016 at 10:34 PM
elijah drugich, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
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May 14, 2016 at 3:03 PM
ELIJAH, Fantastic writing, glad to read your poem. ~Love LINDA~
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