I Am a Bitterweed

I enjoy turning the cow's milk sour
as they graze on me hour by hour
Simply because the farmers you see
Run their tractors straight over me! 

I have sunset flowers of Yellow 
And most of the time I'm mellow
I light up the fields for those passer by
And hear them exclaim, "Oh My Oh My

But out of respect I'll simply say
Enjoy my color and have a nice day! 

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Bitterweed means toxic

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/9/2015 8:28:00 PM
nice win...pd
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Judy Konos
Date: 5/10/2015 4:54:00 AM
Hey Destroyer! thanks
Date: 5/9/2015 6:16:00 PM
Judy. Congratulations. :) SKAT
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Judy Konos
Date: 5/9/2015 6:18:00 PM
Back at ya Skat!
Date: 5/9/2015 11:57:00 AM
Lovely poem!Congrats on your win.
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Judy Konos
Date: 5/9/2015 12:51:00 PM
Thank You Kash....Here's a tip (that you don't need) but...a gardenia as well as a magnolia cannot be sent as a flower gift to someone as they turn yellow where the fingers touch. Meanwhile my florist friend learned that if she put the Gardenia arrangement together in ice water ...(yes underwater) it worked well and met with a fine surprising delivery...LOL....Congrats on your win....it is a real winner....
Date: 5/9/2015 5:37:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Judy:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/9/2015 2:15:00 AM
I enjoyed the humor of this one, Judy! Got a kick out of the tractor line. you rock!! It is so great to see who chose what when I go through the winners' list. Congrats to you.
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Date: 5/6/2015 1:53:00 AM
A charming and creative write, Judy, and perfectly rhymed... Very nicely done! Good luck in Andrea's contest!
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Date: 5/5/2015 11:52:00 PM
Wonderful poem, well discribed a 7
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Date: 5/4/2015 5:06:00 AM
great description and I love the humour Judy - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 5/3/2015 2:52:00 PM
i love how you brought this to life, judy.. so engaging and lively... huggs
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Date: 5/3/2015 2:38:00 PM
Oooh! I'll never look at a dandelion the same way again, Judy. Excellent use of irony to evoke that "Aha moment"! If I think in terms of personification, perhaps you look for the good in everyone (weed or fancy flower) and that is a great quality to have. Way to go, Judy!
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Judy Konos
Date: 5/3/2015 3:46:00 PM
How do I love thee? Let me ways the count!
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