Ma Yaseen Poet Triolet

I Am a 8

We come alone, and alone we depart,
This journey compels us to play our part.
Come now, no one stays for eternity's span,
We come alone, and alone we depart.

How can the moon conceal its glow?
He stands first and last, this truth we know.
We come alone, and alone we depart,
This journey compels us to play our part.

Copyright 20/9/14
form written for a contest.
path no: 8
destiny no: 8

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Tim Smith October 5, 2014 at 2:44 PM Congrats Malik on the win....cheers Tim

Brenda Meier-Hans October 4, 2014 at 8:46 AM Congratulations on your win Malik

Jan Allison October 4, 2014 at 7:31 AM Dropping back with my congratulations Malik:-) Hugs Jan xx

Dr.Ram Mehta October 4, 2014 at 6:31 AM Congrats on the win, nice write, Malik Ma Yaseen October 4, 2014 at 7:13 AM Thanks Dr. Mehta

Andrea Dietrich October 4, 2014 at 2:24 AM I really love the theme of your poem. It was just line two that repeated at the end that was strange for me. congratulations in my contest. You wrote a very nice triolet. Love the imagery of the moon hiding under chiffon! Ma Yaseen October 4, 2014 at 3:10 AM well thanks for liking the theme and imagery Dear Andrea, you are so kind.... I cannot understand how the line was strange to you, Can you please elucidate it a bit?// Malik

Paul Callus September 28, 2014 at 7:50 AM Ahhh so you have a double 8, Malik! Is that supposed to be lucky?! Enjoyed your triolet....deep and intriguing. gl in the contest. // paul Ma Yaseen September 28, 2014 at 11:05 PM Yeah I never knew it, Now I know and feel like being lucky. Thanks Paul for your time and the kind words.. God bless you. Malik

David William Breidenthal September 27, 2014 at 12:17 AM Awesome poem. Wow, a simple poem, but a profound, great message. Ma Yaseen September 28, 2014 at 2:50 AM thanks for dropping by,David.... Keep visiting,,, God bless you

Kelly Deschler September 25, 2014 at 12:52 AM Eventually, every beginning has to meet it's end, and we all have to learn to except that.... I enjoyed this deep and soulful write. Great work, Malik! Good luck in Andrea's contest! Ma Yaseen September 25, 2014 at 1:41 AM Many many thanks for your remarkable words,, Stay blessed

Brenda Meier-Hans September 24, 2014 at 9:32 PM Nice Triolet Malik. Good luck on the contest. Ma Yaseen September 24, 2014 at 11:02 PM thanks Brenda for stopping by and for the comment.

Anne-Lise Andresen September 24, 2014 at 9:24 AM - My "lucky numbers are 8" - A lovely write to the contest, Malik! - I wish you luck and hope you win - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Ma Yaseen September 24, 2014 at 11:01 PM Wow, that is great, i have not considered any number yet, Thanks for your visit Anne always.

Darlene Gifford September 23, 2014 at 12:13 AM I, too, shake your hand on this poem well written. Good luck in the contest, I enjoyed reading your triolet. Ma Yaseen September 23, 2014 at 12:15 AM woo, then good if you too are 8,,, thanks for your time and the wishes...

Liam Mcdaid September 21, 2014 at 8:26 AM such a beautiful vision painted wxcellent Ma Yaseen September 21, 2014 at 11:33 PM Thanks Liam for your visit

Maurice Yvonne September 21, 2014 at 8:04 AM A beautiful poem and a fine read, thank you. Ma Yaseen September 21, 2014 at 11:33 PM Thanks a lot Mr. Maurice

Demetrios Trifiatis September 21, 2014 at 4:13 AM Have no idea what a Triolet is, for that reason only on the content I am ready to comment which I find deep and thought provoking! Beautiful, my friend Malik! Good luck with the contest! Ma Yaseen September 21, 2014 at 4:40 AM thanks Sir for your appreciating words..

Jan Allison September 20, 2014 at 10:00 AM lovely triolet Malik good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx Ma Yaseen September 21, 2014 at 2:05 AM Thanks Jan for stopping by. god bless you.

Dr.Ram Mehta September 20, 2014 at 8:04 AM Perfectly done triolet. You have to write your date of birth and month if it is for the contest. Please give once over to the rules of the contest. Ma Yaseen September 21, 2014 at 2:04 AM thanks sir for stooping by and a nice comment, I have mentioned it there, is it like if i edited it here, it will automatically get edited there?? i dint know about this, if you can help me out here?