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I am the wind The morning star The silver moon Shining so far I am the mist Upon the lake And water lily For you to take I am the night The secret dream And scary shadows That makes me scream I am the day With life to cope Tears on my face I wish to stop I am the eagle Up in the sky I am just me Quiet and shy I am the waves On stormy sea I’m just a girl I’m simple, me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/2/2014 5:57:00 PM
Very nice comparisons and congrats on being featured this week :)
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Date: 5/2/2014 12:25:00 PM
I like who you are! Your simplicity reflects an awesome lot. A very lovely and fresh-feel poem. cu // paul
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Date: 4/28/2014 6:08:00 AM
Awesome write, Congrats on your poem being featured this week, Elizabeth
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Elizabeth Jubenville
Date: 4/28/2014 8:05:00 PM
Love your comment , Thank you very much... Ellie
Date: 8/22/2013 5:31:00 PM
- A nice poem to read .... lovely rhymes and beautiful poem, Elizabeth ! -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Elizabeth Jubenville
Date: 8/22/2013 9:29:00 PM
Thank you Anne Lise, ..... :)
Date: 8/22/2013 9:10:00 AM
So beautiful. Its good to be ourselves. I like the moral message in this poem.
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Elizabeth Jubenville
Date: 8/22/2013 5:05:00 PM
Thank you Christine, I do appreciate you stopping by...:)
Date: 8/22/2013 7:57:00 AM
You captured this write piece so nicely. Lovely work Elizabeth.
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Elizabeth Jubenville
Date: 8/22/2013 9:11:00 AM
Thank you, and thank you for taking the time... :)
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Elizabeth Jubenville
Date: 8/22/2013 9:09:00 AM
Thank you ...:)
Date: 8/22/2013 1:05:00 AM
Nice. I love the vivid mental picture in which you have painted
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Elizabeth Jubenville
Date: 8/22/2013 5:09:00 PM
Thank you Poetic Justice, ..:)

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