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I Am

I am the wind 
The morning star
The silver moon 
Shining so far

I am the mist
Upon the lake
And water lily 
For you to take

I am the night
The secret dream
And scary shadows 
That makes me scream

I am the day
With life to cope
Tears on my face 
I wish to stop

I am the eagle
Up in the sky
I am just me
Quiet and shy

I am the waves 
On stormy sea
I’m just a girl
I’m simple, me

Copyright © Elizabeth Jubenville | Year Posted 2013

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Casarah Nance Date: 5/2/2014 5:57:00 PM Very nice comparisons and congrats on being featured this week :) Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 5/2/2014 12:25:00 PM I like who you are! Your simplicity reflects an awesome lot. A very lovely and fresh-feel poem. cu // paul Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 4/28/2014 6:08:00 AM Awesome write, Congrats on your poem being featured this week, Elizabeth Login to Reply Elizabeth Jubenville Date: 4/28/2014 8:05:00 PM Love your comment , Thank you very much... Ellie

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/22/2013 5:31:00 PM - A nice poem to read .... lovely rhymes and beautiful poem, Elizabeth ! -oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Elizabeth Jubenville Date: 8/22/2013 9:29:00 PM Thank you Anne Lise, ..... :)

Christine Phillips Date: 8/22/2013 9:10:00 AM So beautiful. Its good to be ourselves. I like the moral message in this poem. Login to Reply Elizabeth Jubenville Date: 8/22/2013 5:05:00 PM Thank you Christine, I do appreciate you stopping by...:)

Mustapha Mohammed Date: 8/22/2013 7:57:00 AM You captured this write piece so nicely. Lovely work Elizabeth. Login to Reply Elizabeth Jubenville Date: 8/22/2013 9:11:00 AM Thank you, and thank you for taking the time... :) Elizabeth Jubenville Date: 8/22/2013 9:09:00 AM Thank you ...:)

Honestly J.T. Date: 8/22/2013 1:05:00 AM Nice. I love the vivid mental picture in which you have painted Login to Reply Elizabeth Jubenville Date: 8/22/2013 5:09:00 PM Thank you Poetic Justice, ..:)