I Adore You Girl

You wonder why I so love write,
Coz’ got this so feeling that seems to be right!
Found this girl who is a figure of life.
Just love her like my well future wife.

She painted me things that I haven’t ever seen,
Her smiles are sparkles like a one fluffy scene.
I always look forward to listen to her,
She speaks really fine and I so adore her.

I always see her singing like a simple princess,
Will she notice me in me my ever cutest glances?
If she won’t talk or even stare at me? That’s fine!
She brought me so much joy and put me on this line.

Thanks for bringing out the best in me.
You are the reason why I see myself in certainty.
Though you have no idea how you changed my fate,
Forever to admire you girl and that’s my pretty faith.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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April 12, 2015 at 2:49 AM
Hello Lei, congratulations on your beautiful win... HUGS ~LINDA~
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April 5, 2015 at 8:48 PM
Tender and sweet words of love... Well written, Lei! Congrats on your win!
Allison Avatar
April 5, 2015 at 6:55 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Lei:-) Hugs Jan xx
Allison Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 6:59 PM
Shes a lucky lady indeed :-) Hugs jan xxx
Chircop Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 3:44 AM
Cute indeed !!Welcome to ps Lei
Strauss Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 3:47 AM
Thanks Charmaine! Appreciate it!
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