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I Admit It

maybe it's wrong to think of you and to wonder what do you do but to think what wrong is about it's one of the question i doubt it's a blade that cuts through my heart a monstrous feeling to depart but why do i need to do it? does it matter if I'll admit? you will never have to bother for I'm the one who will suffer to battle with my own sinking and to fight with my own struggling i faithfully admit the truth whether right or wrong it is both a challenge for my soul to dare well, who the hell are you to care?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/2/2010 11:36:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Nadifee. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/2/2010 3:28:00 AM
Somethings are so hard for me to admit. Well done on your poetry, have a nice one,..p.d.
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Date: 6/2/2010 3:24:00 AM
A nice admission. I enjoyed it
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