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I

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Came into being,
Achieved self-awareness;
Wondered if it was worth it.

My consciousness existed first!


Mark Halliday, 201405428

Copyright © Mark J. Halliday | Year Posted 2014

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June 16, 2014 at 3:39 PM

a different, unique tune for the theme, mark.. belated congrats on your fine win in my challenge.. huggs

Richard Lamoureux

June 14, 2014 at 8:26 AM

For me one of the best!

Pandita Sietesantos

June 12, 2014 at 11:51 AM

Beautiful write - no wonder you are a winner! Congratulations on your win!

Andrea Dietrich

June 12, 2014 at 12:17 AM

wow, this is REALLY a unique one on the list. congrats for your win. impressive!

June 11, 2014 at 11:13 PM

Mark, :) CONGRATS in Nette's CREATE YOUR PYRAMID contest! Luv ~SKAT~

Carrie Richards

June 11, 2014 at 3:35 PM

Oh, a completely different take on the contest! I like this very much, Mark !!

June 11, 2014 at 2:38 PM

Congratulations, Mark, on your win.

Poet Destroyer A

June 11, 2014 at 9:54 AM

Love where you took it Mark. Congratulations, with your sweet PYRAMID win.... Hugs ~LINDA~

June 11, 2014 at 6:45 AM

Congrats on your win, Mark.. I love the depth of thought with so few words.. Hugs.. Arlene..

June 11, 2014 at 4:40 AM

Congrats on a fine win, Mark! Interesting take on this theme! // paul

May 28, 2014 at 11:07 AM

Fabulous write Mark i hope this does well in the contest. Hugs Jan xxxx

Mark J. Halliday

May 28, 2014 at 12:30 PM

Thanks. I sort of just threw it together before my shift started.

May 28, 2014 at 10:18 AM

Bravo, wonderful within its brevity, so much meaning in so few words! Best, Robert

Mark J. Halliday

May 28, 2014 at 12:31 PM

Thanks. I sort of just threw it together before my shift started.

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