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Sin trepar por las paredes llegaré hasta donde pueda porque no tenemos la misma meta ni he de seguir tu camino. Si te fijas en mi cuerpo tendré los arañazos y las patadas de la experiencia, cicatrices que identificamos con el tiempo. Y, aún así, tendré que decir que he vivido poco y que otra vez empezaría.

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James Inman

Date: 9/19/2020 5:54:00 AM

I didn't realize I had not left a comment on this write. Your poems have a searching quality, always reaching for a, seemingly, unattainable goal. The sadness is profound. Your words, even when translated, are lovely. I also enjoy hearing your oratory versions.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/13/2020 1:04:00 PM

A lovely expressive poem, Almudena. I had to use Google translate, but even so it all made sense to me. Maybe you could post your poems in both English and Spanish. ~ Welcome to Soup ~ paul

Almudena Gavala
Date: 4/13/2020 4:40:00 PM

Thank you so much, Paul! It's so nice to read your words. Thank you for your advice, I'll try to write some of them in english. Regards.