Hypnotized

The things I’ve forgotten 
are watering the garden.

I can tell by the way she’s 
walking he’s been talking to her.
just like in a dream, 
where everything’s beautiful, 
And moving too slow. 

All the songs are sad,
and the look in the eye 
says the minds are gone.

In there brilliant disguises
the people roll bye,
painted faces in the hallway,
and the children sparkle like stars..

The struggles are all the same,
and so is the pain.

The clowns play on tightropes,
and the lion tamer gambles with his life.
The lions, elephants, and monkeys go insane.
The freaks are laughing, the crowd is clapping,
                          but they don’t know why?
painted faces in the hallway.

The coward is caged
 in fear  and beautiful.
The soldier is hypnotized,
he does not know he is the coward.

The bombs don’t care,
 they only want to kill.
“ who will they tax,
when there’s no one 
left to kill?

And the look in the eye 
says the minds are gone.

Hypnotized!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 4/16/2012 6:35:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Gordon. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/16/2012 12:34:00 PM
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