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Hypnotic Effect

smooth river gurgles bewitching birds belt out blues ~ i am lulled to sleep 02/15/17

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Date: 12/29/2020 10:02:00 PM

Jo, this is so soothing! Loved all the b-words in line 2. I would like to be there! Congrats on your win ~ John

Date: 12/29/2020 11:29:00 AM

A gorgeous haiku, love the imagery! Congratulations on your trophy win!

Date: 3/12/2017 10:02:00 AM

Lovely Haiku. Captures the scene perfectly, incorporating playfulness and a dash of alliteration. Fantastic!

Date: 3/3/2017 10:30:00 PM

Profound! #7+

Date: 2/27/2017 9:37:00 AM

Beautiful scene!

Date: 2/16/2017 7:39:00 PM

Yes, it's nature's lullaby, dear!! So nice.

Date: 2/16/2017 9:54:00 AM

Hypnotic indeed! Great haiku, Jo:)

Date: 2/16/2017 8:28:00 AM

Nice haiku ...

Date: 2/16/2017 7:04:00 AM

Such a soothing and melodic piece Jo. What I wouldn't give to be in this setting you have created right now. Beautiful my friend.

Date: 2/16/2017 5:24:00 AM

Ah how wonderful it is dear, Jo! Loved it!

Date: 2/16/2017 3:01:00 AM

- Lovely haiku, Jo - hugs // Anne-Lise :)