Premiere Contest WinnerHypnotic Effect


            smooth river gurgles 

     bewitching birds belt out blues ~

i am lulled to sleep


02/15/17
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Watt Avatar
December 29, 2020 at 10:02 PM
Jo, this is so soothing! Loved all the b-words in line 2. I would like to be there! Congrats on your win ~ John
Kitchin Avatar
December 29, 2020 at 11:29 AM
A gorgeous haiku, love the imagery! Congratulations on your trophy win!
Michaels Avatar
March 12, 2017 at 10:02 AM
Lovely Haiku. Captures the scene perfectly, incorporating playfulness and a dash of alliteration. Fantastic!
Nusker Avatar
March 3, 2017 at 10:30 PM
Profound! #7+
Rodrigues Avatar
February 27, 2017 at 9:37 AM
Beautiful scene!
Dietrich Avatar
February 16, 2017 at 7:39 PM
Yes, it's nature's lullaby, dear!! So nice.
Turner Avatar
February 16, 2017 at 9:54 AM
Hypnotic indeed! Great haiku, Jo:)
Gupta Avatar
February 16, 2017 at 8:28 AM
Nice haiku ...
Green Avatar
February 16, 2017 at 7:04 AM
Such a soothing and melodic piece Jo. What I wouldn't give to be in this setting you have created right now. Beautiful my friend.
Trifiatis Avatar
February 16, 2017 at 5:24 AM
Ah how wonderful it is dear, Jo! Loved it!
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February 16, 2017 at 3:01 AM
- Lovely haiku, Jo - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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