Hymns

frost wives sleep on the wings of butterflies snowflakes. cool fingers touch my dream's edge my dream nettles fades in a wombat pouch I suck milk with my brothers in marsupium they play my milk-mothers tweak eyes amorous on the yellow ruins of cold sinful emerald earth world lies deep the ocean frothing at the mouth blissful mermaids naked flutter eyelashes iris green skins melt like butter down the wall of buckwheat drip by drip trickle into the cave of its triangular seeds © Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty 11 December 2014

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 12/12/2014 7:22:00 AM

Wonderful imagery and expression. Everytime I read, I find something new! Very creative work, Rajat!! Hugs, Rhonda

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 12/13/2014 1:21:00 AM

Rhonda great hug from me. God bless. Wish you a lovely week end XXXXX rajat

Sanchita Sanchi

Date: 12/12/2014 1:34:00 AM

well written,its touching one..well framed..keep writing

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 12/12/2014 6:12:00 AM

Thanks Sanchita. Love ...rajat

David Meade

Date: 12/11/2014 8:39:00 AM

You have outdone yourself -- I followed every word today . . . love, laughter and frolick -- this is nature at its very best. Lovely my dear friend. Lovely!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 12/11/2014 9:32:00 AM

love DavidXXXXX rajat

Joel Thornton

Date: 12/11/2014 7:08:00 AM

WOW, Absolutely splendid Rajat. I think this is my new favorite poem.. Excellently done. I really will read and re read this throughout the day. Thanks for sharing this .. Very Very expressive and descriptive pen. ~ a 7 ~Joel

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 12/11/2014 7:20:00 AM

Thanks Joel for your lovely comments. You are so inspiring. Love XXX rajat