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Written on July 18, 2026

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Hymn of the Heart


Like an ache, in the startled breath
A moment, a prayer, a regret
Can I see beyond the word’s quiet death?
Wisdoms taught by souls who beget…

Griefs fallen on hearts who believe
Silence fills the night, stars and moon
Writing the melancholy, as I grieve
Nothing is as it was, but oh so soon…

The words pour from the soul, a story
Songs in rhythms of light, 
It’s never the past, despite its glory
Who reveals the memories we fight

Will the tales still our quiet verses
Visions, images so often flawed
All of those shadows the dream curses
Tearing down walls, a heart thawed…

By the silence beneath a tender gaze
The chorus a poet bleeds,
On the wings of a spirit caught up in praise
Risking those memories poetry breeds

Displayed on the surface of each rhyme
There are whispers of grace, so bold
Rising in the spirit, tearstains climb
Into the music of a heart made of gold

A sonnet, a couplet, whatever ode
Glistening slivers of lights who shine
It’s to Our Creator, all poetry is owed
He’s brought our souls a love so very fine

In the succulent music of each poem
Are notes of a song, a psalm, a prayer
We all can give praise, as just below Him
Are splatters of insight, our words will bare

Naked colors, still murmurs of life
Seeking to silence the dark dread
Felt by the troubled, all that strife
Lost amid the words a poet said

As a weak heart promises to be brave
Amid the verse, there are visions 
Lovely words, ventures a heart must save
Even before the poet makes revisions

Write on, precious soul, write it down
Tell the world what is felt, what is felt
Are feelings on light in which we drown
If we remember any heart can melt…

When given their answers through words
Brought to life by a spirit, understood
Thoughts and feelings, gentle as songbirds
Every poem read feels as it should…

Every poem is felt, and it feels so good!!!
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August 2, 2026 at 10:12 AM
Dear Regina, how evocatively youve described the ache and the adversities of life ~ they way pain leaves us torn and searching for truths. "Writing the melancholy, as I grieve Nothing is as it was, but oh so soon…" Oh my, I really felt the grievances of a trembling heart.. yearning to receive the clarity of the cosmos in quiet verses.. the way you've received the preciousness of His divine light, the grace of the Almighty who can thaw our hearts. Just absolutely soulful! Thank you for inking this and giving voice ti the hymn of your heart! Congratulations in your well-deserved top win in my first contest 🌹✨⭐🌙✨🌹
Rodrigues Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 4:54 PM
In the succulent music of each poem Are notes of a song, a psalm, a prayer…love that last line!
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July 18, 2026 at 2:38 AM
Well versed.
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