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Hiya Sharma sponsors  HYMN OF THE HEART.....18/7/26

 

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Hymn of the heart

“Be not led by the fears in your mind. Be led by the dreams in your heart.” – Roy T. Bennett

Supremely silent, so succulently swept,
Oh heart of mine, incumbently wept.
Furtive floral fronds forever flowing.
Sheer delight of guiltless tears are slowing.

Grasp my hand that I might feel you.
Heartfelt hints help heal horizons hue.
Composing the chorus a poet bleeds.
Sycamore scents sending somber seeds.

Oh heart of mine, the gladness peeked.
The song my soul never seeked.
Rapture reminiscing rivalled respite.
Dictating dialect, dawn's dearest delight.

Destiny delivers drab dust dreaming.
Soul seeks splendor, sweet scent streaming.
The song my soul never sought.
Hear these hibiscus hymns hauntingly caught.

To listen to the trill of this heart's hymn.
The notes of ecstasy filled to the brim.
Oh heart of mine your Janus faced genus,
a violin verse between venom and Venus.

The crescendo hit, I kissed an opera octave.
A lilting tune blissfully reversed to enslave.
Love exploded revealing lavender so vital,
resistance released rallentando reduced recital.

Oh heart of mine my hymn is ending.
Warmed with wishful waiting was wending.
Culminating coda, classic cadence concludes.
Perfume from the musical bouquet exudes.

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Hiya Sharma August 4, 2026 at 1:25 AM Ohhh wowww! I can absolutely smell the fragrance of the perfume that exudes from the musical bouquet! How lovely is that?! Every line is lusciously layered with alliteration and mesmerizing imagery ~ especially that part, "The crescendo hit, I kissed an opera octave. A lilting tune blissfully reversed to enslave. Love exploded revealing lavender so vital, resistance released rallentando reduced recital" so breathtaking! Love the musical wordsmithery here! So captivating and dreamy.. Congratulations to you on your beautiful win in my first contest! Really a pleasure reading this soulful take! Sending you light and best wishes ~ ✨🧜‍♀️🌹🌙🌹🧜‍♀️✨ Speaks Volumes August 4, 2026 at 3:19 PM Your pre-ordained phrases gave me inspiration Hiya. The poem just flowed from my fingers, as they waited to use your fanciful words in the hymn. Your enthusiasm for my poem and 2nd place in your contest is so gratifying. Thank you. ✨✨

Joanna Daniel July 21, 2026 at 11:46 PM Alliteration is perfect with musical words woven in beautifully crafting great poetry, Wen, just how Hiya would like:) Speaks Volumes August 1, 2026 at 7:43 AM Oh Joanna your comments are so uplifting. Cant thank you enough.

David Scott July 20, 2026 at 5:02 PM Well love the rhymin pattern flow beautiful romantic peace Speaks Volumes August 1, 2026 at 7:42 AM Thank you so much David. I really appreciate your encouraging comment.

Natasha L Scragg July 18, 2026 at 4:26 AM This is brilliant... Your use of alliteration gives the read such a smoothe flow and there's some very beautiful imagery too :-D Speaks Volumes July 18, 2026 at 3:25 PM Words cant convey the appreciation I have for your encouragement of my poetry. I'll settle for just saying a big Thank you and best wishes.

Alison A Smith nee Howarth July 18, 2026 at 2:32 AM Awesome use of the prompts. Speaks Volumes July 18, 2026 at 3:18 PM Alison thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. So Appreciated, best wishes from Wen,

Regina Mcintosh July 18, 2026 at 12:56 AM Lovely writing. Best wishes for the contest Speaks Volumes July 18, 2026 at 3:20 PM Such a lovely compliment coming from a talented writer as yourself Regina. A sincere thank you.