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Hyacinths and Daffodils

Sleeping beauty has reawakened, and it is springtime again,
So like the younger days, when you skipped with Madeleine.
Purple hyacinths and daffodils, are fragrant in the meadows,
And the bush near the house, is colored with burgundy rose!

Wild hyacinths and dewy daffodils, usher in the sassy season,
Giving secret joy to many hearts, within the blooming region.
Birds sing in chartreuse fields, from morning until glitzy night,
When a day's flamenco dancers, are the rapture of moonlight!


Written on 4/24/2022
For: Spring Rhyme - 8-12 Lines Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Goldsmith Avatar
May 15, 2022 at 8:46 AM
Congratulations on this win. A beautiful write/picture. Spring is here, hooray!!! Today, be blessed with your win...........
Buehler Avatar
May 15, 2022 at 10:04 AM
Thank you for your compliment, congratulations and blessing, Paula. Have a wonderful day, Evelyn
Kitchin Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 1:01 PM
Evelyn, congratulations on your winning placement with your gorgeous Spring poem!
Buehler Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 8:55 PM
Thank you so much for the honor, Tania. I thoroughly enjoyed your contest. :)
Loving Iii Avatar
April 25, 2022 at 2:22 PM
Read the second time and it rhymed so well. I felt the gift from God and that's all that matters.
Buehler Avatar
April 25, 2022 at 10:16 PM
You have my very deep thanks for your kind words, John. :)
Ball Avatar
April 25, 2022 at 3:42 AM
Another gem Evelyn. I think one day your name will be written along with the well known poet we love. Good stuff as always. JB
Buehler Avatar
April 25, 2022 at 11:11 AM
Thank you for your kind thoughts, and for the wonderful compliment, Judy. Blessings, Evelyn
Kalita Avatar
April 25, 2022 at 12:28 AM
It reminds me of Wordsworth's " I travel lonely as a cloud," can't give more tribute to this composition. Just splendid
Buehler Avatar
April 25, 2022 at 11:15 AM
I extend my heartfelt thanks for your lovely compliment. Blessings, Evelyn
Buhagiar Avatar
April 24, 2022 at 10:44 PM
I love all your nature poems and this is special. The rapture of the moon invites memories. Blessings.
Buehler Avatar
April 25, 2022 at 11:17 AM
Your appreciation is a real joy. Thank you so much, Victor. Blessings.
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April 24, 2022 at 9:02 PM
Lovely poetry Evelyn and that last line - “When a day's flamenco dancers, are the rapture of moonlight” is wonderful… Belle
Buehler Avatar
April 24, 2022 at 9:13 PM
Thank you very much for your kind appreciation, Belle. Blessings, Evelyn
Rodrigues Avatar
April 24, 2022 at 6:03 PM
Uplifted by each color, each lovely flower, the flamenco dancers and the rapture of the moon!
Buehler Avatar
April 24, 2022 at 9:14 PM
I'm so glad, Kim! Thank you so much. :)
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