Hustling and Bustling- the Ghetto's Slogan

So packed and full is the train a lot die trying to taste of its final gain. This journey so full of pain as it seems all that Life can offer is a cane treating its bunch of victims with disdain. But don't give it all up and go off the lane to this cause stay true and sane. In Life priorities, make it the main provided it is clean and plain. Cos finally, it won't be in vain. Just be patient on the rain when its out pour comes your rewards shall build up like the empire in Spain. Accepting the newly found guardian whom unto you it begets after near-surviving years of neglect. Now, your pain it will recompense and deservedly account for every drop of your sweat!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Loving Iii Avatar
March 27, 2014 at 6:34 PM
the rhyming. you really out did yourself.
Melugin Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 5:50 PM
One awesome write on the rhyme train! 7 my best, chuck
Andresen Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 12:17 PM
- If we lose hope .... we lose "everything" - well written, Funom :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Goswami Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 2:16 AM
Great thoughts...touched my heart ....Injured fire...Tears of love...Positive landing " Accepting the newly found guardian whom unto you it begets after near-surviving years of neglect. " ...I am grateful...Thank you very much...Best wishes from India...
Makama Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 11:45 AM
Thanks a lot Sandip... Your words are priceless and so encouraging
Hamilton Avatar
March 25, 2014 at 4:16 PM
very good description Funom great pen hugs
Makama Avatar
March 25, 2014 at 5:10 PM
Thanks a lot Shadow Hamilton... Always a good friend and of huge encouragement to me
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