Hushed By a Voice

Filling my lungs with my first breath starts the cycle of birth and death. And startled by life's rakish sounds, my beating heart rapidly pounds. A cool breeze evokes such pleasure it's impossible to measure. And yet, my gaze goes unbroken; my astonishment unspoken. Feelings and sensations abound within the world that I've just found. And upon opening my eyes, anxiety fuels my cries. Hushed by the sweetest sound I know, my tears slow to a trickling flow. For I'd heard that voice in the womb, chiding me as I kicked for room. The voice of my mother, to me, is a source of comfort, you see. So, I close my droopy lids tight, yawn, and chase sleep into the night.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Gauthier Avatar
March 19, 2018 at 10:24 PM
Other than your opening two lines, This is my favourite stanza "I’m hushed by a sweet sound I know and tears slow to an ebbing flow. For it was heard while in the womb singing soft as I kicked for room."
Pinet Avatar
March 20, 2018 at 9:13 AM
Thanks Line, your continued support is truly appreciated my friend, Emile.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 23, 2017 at 8:02 PM
Lovely tribute to mother and child!
Pinet Avatar
June 24, 2017 at 9:20 AM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace