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HUSH

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Blanket too heavy, thick~ swallows screams in my ribs. Hollow cathedral where echoes once lived.
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January 3, 2026 at 3:07 AM
This is big feeling in a hollow space. The ribs are so like a vaulted room; a cathedral is an apt metaphor. All the K sounds add to the feeling too. Deep meaning in a few words. J
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