Husband Dear

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This poem is a figment of my imagination. It's about what a husband who loves his wife would feel if he ever was neglected by his wife - MBF


I romance you, but you romance the sparkling stone
I love you with my heart, but your heart is in the phone

I talk to you lovingly, you talk to our little pet Tommy
I ask you to cook for me, you turn to call your mommy

I question, what ever happened to our undying love?
You look fixedly at me, and wonder why I’m asking now?

Roses were red, violets were blue when we used to date
Now, rubies are red, sapphires are blue as I curse my fate

Marriage, before it, I had my liberty and was independent 
Since you entered my life, my neck has a  collar with a pendant

You never cease talking to your friends, and your mother
Over phone, when I make an urgent call you don’t bother

I know you love me, but it is for your own self-interest
Which actually means you love what is good for your rest

I know you love me but you know it is, also, for your own good
Like the goose that laid the golden eggs, I’d worry about your mood

You wish to be one of high society and take part in kitty party
To be at home and manage the house instead of being nasty

Not worrying about cooking, children, and their school
From work I return, to do your chores, again to be a fool

mbfarookh

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 3/19/2024 2:50:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this. Love it
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MB Farookh
Date: 3/19/2024 3:19:00 PM
You are welcome, my friend. Blessings to you!
Date: 3/18/2024 12:39:00 PM
Hello MB Farnookh, It sound like this person had married the wrong person. I feel badly for this person. That woman he married turned out to be the wrong person. i wonder how long they dated beg=fore they married. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene./
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/19/2024 10:52:00 AM
Hello MB Farnookh, Hi, so nice to meet you. yes of course i will read the wife's respond. Yes you are right creaking doors hanging s the longest. Yes I will read the wife's respond. Blessings my friend. /Darlene/
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MB Farookh
Date: 3/18/2024 6:24:00 PM
Hahaha... If you observe keenly around you there's so much to write. I suggest you also read the wife's rejoinder. Sometimes creaking doors hang the longest. They cannot manage each other, also they cannot live without each other :) Thank you, Darlene. Blessings to you!
Date: 12/19/2023 6:54:00 AM
Enjoy reading your work,thank you for sharing and have a great time here.
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MB Farookh
Date: 12/24/2023 12:41:00 PM
Thank you so much, KS. It means a lot for a newbie.
Date: 12/15/2023 6:25:00 PM
In the movie: "As good as it gets", the main characters' book-publishers' secretary asks how he's able to write women so well and he says; "I think of a man and take away reason, and accountability". When I started laughing at that my wife said; "That's not funny!"
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Robert Warlov
Date: 12/18/2023 1:14:00 AM
I wonder then, given your new-found understanding, whether you would consider undertaking an analysis of your work with the object of a sequel? ;~}
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Robert Warlov
Date: 12/15/2023 9:09:00 PM
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MB Farookh
Date: 12/15/2023 9:00:00 PM
Lol. Just the comment to start my day.
Date: 12/15/2023 1:27:00 PM
The wife's rejoinder will follow soon - MBF
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