Jean Murray Poet Verse

Husband

How is it you make me
Hunger for your rough touch?
Hate missing you so much.
Holding back the teardrops.
Have prayed for your return.
Hurry home to me please.
Husband sailing rough seas.

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Arthur Vaso May 1, 2017 at 9:47 PM A seafaring poem if there ever was one! Nice poem! Jean Murray May 2, 2017 at 1:24 AM Were you hoping for another husband bashing poem Arthur? I had to stop those. He is seeking royalties.

Funom Makama March 6, 2017 at 10:49 AM This is wonderful. you have once again produced another masterpiece which is a true testament of your reputation in this wonderful community. Thanks a lot for the share. Jean Murray March 6, 2017 at 12:24 PM And thank YOU for such high praise Funom.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 24, 2017 at 8:56 PM A beautiful and touching, Jean...so emotive, I thought it was true, but then I scrolled down. Big congrats to you! Hugs, Rhonda Jean Murray February 25, 2017 at 2:17 AM If only! Thank you Rhonda.

Kim Rodrigues February 24, 2017 at 8:17 PM Great emotional write! Congrats, Jean! Jean Murray February 25, 2017 at 2:16 AM Thank you Kim.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 24, 2017 at 2:42 AM - Congratulations on your great poem in Pleiades H contest, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jean Murray February 24, 2017 at 9:33 AM Thank you Sunshine.

Eve Roper February 23, 2017 at 11:33 PM Very good :) a 7 and congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve Jean Murray February 24, 2017 at 1:18 AM Thank you Eve. I love this form of poetry.

Andrea Dietrich February 23, 2017 at 7:36 PM He is a sailor for real? That must fill you with anxiety!! I think you did these theme beautifully . Congrats for your win. Jean Murray February 24, 2017 at 1:17 AM He sails my stormy dreams Andrea.

Kim Merryman February 23, 2017 at 5:31 PM Jean, you wrote a whole story in 7 lines! Smooth flowing lines throughout. Congrats on your 3rd place win! Blessings, KIm Jean Murray February 23, 2017 at 5:39 PM I love your contests Kim. Thank you for the placement.I wish I could say my husband will be delighted. He is still only the husband I wish for.

Agnes Krampe February 23, 2017 at 5:21 PM Nice one - congrats on your win, Jean. Jean Murray February 23, 2017 at 5:36 PM Thank you Agnes.

Just James February 20, 2017 at 11:47 PM Sounds n bit fishy to me...:) Jean Murray February 21, 2017 at 1:14 AM It is a little fishy. I wishy it was true. But you knew.

Daniel Turner February 20, 2017 at 7:48 PM Was his name Barnacle Bill? Nice pleiades, Jean:) Good luck! Jean Murray February 21, 2017 at 1:12 AM No. Fisherman Fred instead. Thank you DT.

Tim Smith February 20, 2017 at 5:56 PM Have you been hitting the bottle : ) He is gone...hooked to a rock Jean Murray February 20, 2017 at 6:03 PM I'm actually sipping peppermint tea as we speak Tim. What's this you say?? He's been washed away?? Dare I say Hooray?? I don't mean that! Of course there will be wailing and gnashing of teeth. Sob...

Jan Allison February 20, 2017 at 5:36 PM aww this is beautiful Jean - so full of love and longing:-) hugs Jan xx Jean Murray February 20, 2017 at 5:48 PM Hello Jan. I gave him a soft touch to begin with, but decided that would be unlikely from a fisherman. I know this because my own husband was a gardener.

James Inman February 20, 2017 at 5:34 PM I feel your longing Jean. Jean Murray February 20, 2017 at 5:46 PM I have long had a longing now James. Thank you for stopping by to comment.